Sorrow

I watched her die from the flush, her heart and soul began to crush.
I saw her eyes close my mouth she touched, in my body i felt a blood rush,
love from this person can no longer exist, not in my mind disappear in the vast abist.
To lose everything a person common purpose is gone, the world to you and time is torn,
beyond the flush their is no love, not even heaven protected me from above. The flush is
now working on another, my one my only poor grandmother. The flush seems to know no 
limits only pain, I must realize the sun can't sine forever, some days it's got to rain.
The flush it replies, I am void confused lost in the darkness of the earth, then i said you took 
everything confused I was at birth, this, how can it be, explanation it don't have for me,
I cry you see, life expense has no meaning to me, I say this is the end you see,
to the flush I could never blend, in the darkness I sit I remain again, have you ever been 
burned by fire, beat to the flush with a live wire, the flush has destoryed my family.... 
randomly, can you believe the darkness of all pain, one man could not contain, it will run 
your heart dry of the blood that was visible to the eye,
sleepless nights dreaming dreams of a brighter day, in this darkness their are no leader or
one to pave the way, now I sit here waiting for a better day...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/17/2011 4:25:00 PM
I hope you find a better day.
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Date: 2/10/2010 5:54:00 AM
well now this is definitely a heartfelt piece,so sad but very greatly articulated. you definitely have a way with words kevin. and you are right some days it's gotta rain, and that reminds me of one of my favorite lines in watchmen, " it rains on the just and the unjust alike" if you havent seen that movie you should watch it it inspired alot of my poetry. but i definitely liked this one and i too recently lost my grandmother.
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:29:00 AM
My dear Kevin, I am heartbroken by this write. It is so heavy and sad. I hope you continue to dream good dreams and keep hoping and working towards achieving that better day. It will come. You have to work with God because you can not do it alone. Talk to God. He made you so tell him exactly how you feel and bug him until he answers. He loves you, even when no one else does..Peace and love, Audrey
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