Sorrow

proof is the sunset
that one more day I have lived
and this heart burst not
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Meru, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with your melancholic haiku! Blessings, Kim M
Groen Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:43 AM
you are so wise Kim, thank you for the comment.
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
Groen Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Thank you for the kind comment, C.A., I appreciate it.
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