Sore Losers

it's all over and you were such a bore
burdended down with predjudices
it seems forever more
in the end you knew the score 
you with one less
and us with one more
yes you tried the dirty ways
but they were rejected because of 
this day and age
jim crowism is a weak and dying
old fad
under Gods truth he's melting very fast
like the old hag with water poured
apon her
where she is now
she should have sooner wondered
like the old hags and 
the jim crows of today
they'd better repent
before it's too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richardson Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:28 PM
Lets pray the jim crow era is dying and never resurfaces. Thanks for your comment on my Haiku. Do I detect a fellow soldier? hoooaah!! ~Des Juan
Anish Avatar
November 22, 2008 at 8:33 PM
"Jim Crow" is a dying old fad I think and hope you are right. We have elected a new president - "before it is too late"
Matheny Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 2:59 PM
You never know maybe I want a vampire to bite me. . . Or my bi boyfriend. . . Or someone else. . .
Matheny Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 2:59 PM
Sorry?
Matheny Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 3:30 PM
What?!
Matheny Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 3:16 PM
WELL I'M NIETHER OF THOSE?! So what now?
Matheny Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 3:11 PM
By the way I'm Bi Do you have a problem with bi's or do you only like bi's with good sense of humor?!
Matheny Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 2:08 PM
My cousin and my sister are and they have alot of happening to them and people are being exactly like YOU!!!!!! SO STOP!!!!
Matheny Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 2:05 PM
Dude you can not come to my freakin slumber party cause you're like freakin 45 years old!!!!! And STOP being FREAKIN MEAN TO MY GOD DAMN FRIEND. . . I'm not trying to be rude or anything but you need to seriously stop it or we can't be friends anymore. . . Okay?!
Watts Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 2:04 PM
i dont cry all the time!! i'm esaily offened and i cry easily! sorry i cry to much i have alot going on in my life
Watts Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 1:55 PM
yes it's samantha...and yeah there is nothing wrong with gay people though i'm not gay i have gay friends....and your comment made me cry beacuse the whole gay thing was really mean
Matheny Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 10:39 AM
And you're how old again?
Fawcett Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 2:15 PM
Great write John. The way ahead is steep and rough, but at last there is hope. Nigel
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 9:14 AM
I voted for the liberal. I'll still fight the abortion issue, being pro-life, but everything else seems to be on target. It's time for the finger pointing to stop and a United States become a United States. The first time since 1960 that I've seen so many young citizens actually involved. Vince
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