Sore Legs

Spoke, wheel, handle bar
Where's my car
Now I bike too far
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:29 PM
A fun poem, Jerry. Congrats on your win.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Hello Jerry no wonder the person in your poem has sore legs. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Yep! A bottle full of water, you are welcomed to have it. Have a nice day my friend.
Hackett Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Yep, thanks! Got any water?
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