Soothing Oil

Ten devastating and vulnerable offences;
Could not break at all Egyptian fences;
Ten stone carved divine commandments;
Could not amend the Jewish attachments.


Cloud, sea barbed road or water from rock;                                                                 
Heavenly manna and quails move mind rock?
Water turned wine and, death defeated true life;
And sermon on the mound change little in life.


But blood to the last drop is fast soothing oil;
To hard and tough wheels of mind in turmoil;
History witness even tough Romans proclaim;
Coliseums and crosses turned faithful’ claim.





Love ignite mind engine and care impart fuel;
Public and symbolic presentations may do well;                                                                       
Reality and truth may modify    many life forms;
 Yet a full emptying only can create a transform.                


Freedom of thought sprouts on the just’ blood;                                                                
Freedom of nation is set on patriotic million’s blood;
Human liberation is in track by the Messiahs’ blood;
Still millions need to propel by the soothing oil blood.








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Jose, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 29, 2015 at 6:20 PM
JOSE, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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