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Soothing Oil

Ten devastating and vulnerable offences; Could not break at all Egyptian fences; Ten stone carved divine commandments; Could not amend the Jewish attachments. Cloud, sea barbed road or water from rock; Heavenly manna and quails move mind rock? Water turned wine and, death defeated true life; And sermon on the mound change little in life. But blood to the last drop is fast soothing oil; To hard and tough wheels of mind in turmoil; History witness even tough Romans proclaim; Coliseums and crosses turned faithful’ claim. Love ignite mind engine and care impart fuel; Public and symbolic presentations may do well; Reality and truth may modify many life forms; Yet a full emptying only can create a transform. Freedom of thought sprouts on the just’ blood; Freedom of nation is set on patriotic million’s blood; Human liberation is in track by the Messiahs’ blood; Still millions need to propel by the soothing oil blood. *********

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2016 6:31:00 PM
Jose, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:20:00 PM
JOSE, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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