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Soothing Breeze

Breeze Cool air Coming through Draft in window Wind Peace Calmness Serene, still Freedom in love Sooth Russell Sivey Entrant into nette onclauds “TURN ON THE LANTERNE” contest!

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Tim B

Date: 9/6/2011 8:53:00 PM

Russell, I like that you took a calming approach with the picture. For me it elicited a darker feel, but that is the beauty in poetry that we can both paint such different images from the same inspiration! I love these two lanternes you have written, they flow well and use great image building words like serene and sooth. Good luck in the contest to you as well.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2011 5:58:00 PM

What a lovely interpretation on the picture, Russell. Good for the BP, I'm sure : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/6/2011 5:09:00 PM

Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2011 1:44:00 PM

I could feel the scene..Good luck with this creative and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/6/2011 6:32:00 AM

russel, thanks for joining.. ohh, let me relish this come judging time.. with huggs, nette :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2011 10:28:00 PM

I love a breeze like this, Russell. Soothing as can be in a lanterne form! Luv,Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/5/2011 9:52:00 PM

great work....I did one for this contest also. check it out if you dare!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 9:04:00 PM

U NAILED IT PERFECTLY RUSSELL.. LANTERNE WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITE FORMS WHEN I FIRST JOINED PS.. GOOD LUCK IN THIS CONTEST.. CREATIVE WORDS LUV..