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Soon I will rejoice
when snowflakes disappear,
to welcome Spring.

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Abraham L

November 12, 2013 at 5:55 AM

Thanks for your comments, keep on rejoicing, not only when the snow flakes is gone, but always God bless Abraham

Robin Lane

June 11, 2010 at 2:46 PM

I don't know what it is about your poem, but something struck me about it. I like the "myth" "breath" rhyme, especially!

Ronald Bingham

July 20, 2009 at 9:10 AM

A belated welcome to the Soup, glad to have you aboard. Blessings. Ron

Farah Chamma

April 25, 2009 at 5:51 AM

A wonderful Senryu Kathleen...The imagery gives a sense of warmth =) Thank you for sharing and thank you for your lovely comments... PS: I changled moon-lit to moonlit ...Thank you for that too..It is from people like you that one learns ...Take good care... Always, Farah

Raul Moreno

April 2, 2009 at 8:39 PM

Great work, I welcome Spring as well, nice use of imagery...Raul

Abraham L

March 24, 2009 at 1:07 AM

First of all can I add that God is my vindicator, and he will fight for me, and it doesn’t matter what people say or do to me, he will always come through for me in the end. I can say what I need to say when I am accused or treated unfairly, and leave it in God’s hands, he will do the rest. I am not suggesting that one should sit back and let people give you a

Abraham L

March 24, 2009 at 12:34 AM

Thanks Kathleen for your comment and correction. I like this one, looking forward for the best time of the year as well. Welcome to Poetry Soup looking forward to read more of your poems abe

Laura Mckenzie

January 31, 2009 at 1:51 PM

It sounds good to me time for a change its been one cold snowy winter here! Laura :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 17, 2009 at 10:27 AM

THINK SPRING!!! Warmth, Summer right behind. Vince

December 11, 2008 at 1:11 PM

My kind of poem. I love spring. With colder temps and icy roads here in North Dakota, I can't wait. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem with us and for your kind words regarding mine. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen

Sharon Winter

December 11, 2008 at 5:57 AM

So beautiful! But I have not seen much snow yet and I am looking forward to it like a child! Of course, this poem will be how I feel should we get too much! Love, Shar