Song on the Waves

 Moonbeams chase dark shadows away
 Casting a glimmer on the sea
 As palm trees begin to sway
 A song rides the waves with glee
 Its melody is the shore's plea
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Nicole Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 7:02 PM
The melody is truly beautiful. When night falls and moonlight moves so softly upon the waves, it's magical in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Agustin Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 8:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
Lawrence Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 6:25 AM
I love the imagery here Joseph especially Moonbeams chase dark shadows away . I love this line . Thank you for your visit to my poem . Hugs, Susan :)
Greenhough Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 2:08 PM
The swaying palm tree captivated me in this poem. Is it balmy or treacherous.
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:50 AM
So beautiful and serene, i can hear the melody of the ways and songs carried by waves. You always paint imagery so well and i love the rhymes too dear joseph. Pleasure reading your work always
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Short and sweet. Love it.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:54 PM
- Beautiful poem, Joseph :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:23 AM
What a wonderful story in just 5 lines. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.....................
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