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Song on the Waves

Moonbeams chase dark shadows away Casting a glimmer on the sea As palm trees begin to sway A song rides the waves with glee Its melody is the shore's plea

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/18/2024 7:02:00 PM

The melody is truly beautiful. When night falls and moonlight moves so softly upon the waves, it's magical in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/1/2024 8:58:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/28/2024 6:25:00 AM

I love the imagery here Joseph especially Moonbeams chase dark shadows away . I love this line . Thank you for your visit to my poem . Hugs, Susan :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/27/2024 2:08:00 PM

The swaying palm tree captivated me in this poem. Is it balmy or treacherous.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 9:50:00 AM

So beautiful and serene, i can hear the melody of the ways and songs carried by waves. You always paint imagery so well and i love the rhymes too dear joseph. Pleasure reading your work always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2024 11:28:00 PM

Short and sweet. Love it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2024 1:54:00 PM

- Beautiful poem, Joseph :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2024 11:23:00 AM

What a wonderful story in just 5 lines. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.....................