Song of the Sea

Song of the Sea


Pacific Ocean
Crashing against rocks right now
Forever calling me




English Haiku


October 13, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
Romios Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:20 AM
You express yourself so well. Wish I could pen, with such a flair! I am grateful for your visit and response,Funom. Panagiota xx
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:20 AM
- The power of the song ... lovely haiku, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:19 PM
Glad you liked it,, Anne//Liss,
Wolf Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Oh, that last line whisked me right into the frothy waves! Beautifully and powerfully conceived, Panagiota. :) gw
Romios Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 7:03 PM
You'd pass out at the beauty ...I left SF, but..it never left me. Truly a sirens call..pr
Michael Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:49 AM
What a powerful calling...written on the rocks...Nice one Panagiota
Romios Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, Arturo. Poets like you, contribute to my self-confidence Blessings xx
Sands Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Sounds so beautiful. Well done :)
Romios Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thank you Heidi! It's a beautiful scene etched in my memory..... The Goldden Gate Bridge...the amber lighting those rocks and the Pacific hitting them. It's a sirens call to me.....PR
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