Song of the Sea

Song of the Sea Pacific Ocean Crashing against rocks right now Forever calling me English Haiku October 13, 2019

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Funom Makama

Date: 10/15/2019 10:36:00 AM

Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/15/2019 11:20:00 AM

You express yourself so well. Wish I could pen, with such a flair! I am grateful for your visit and response,Funom. Panagiota xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2019 7:20:00 AM

- The power of the song ... lovely haiku, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/14/2019 7:19:00 PM

Glad you liked it,, Anne//Liss,

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/13/2019 4:36:00 PM

Oh, that last line whisked me right into the frothy waves! Beautifully and powerfully conceived, Panagiota. :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/13/2019 7:03:00 PM

You'd pass out at the beauty ...I left SF, but..it never left me. Truly a sirens call..pr

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/13/2019 10:49:00 AM

What a powerful calling...written on the rocks...Nice one Panagiota

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/13/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, Arturo. Poets like you, contribute to my self-confidence Blessings xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2019 9:51:00 AM

Sounds so beautiful. Well done :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/13/2019 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Heidi! It's a beautiful scene etched in my memory..... The Goldden Gate Bridge...the amber lighting those rocks and the Pacific hitting them. It's a sirens call to me.....PR