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Song of the Ocean

The dark sea heaves, the bright sea sighs, Swells cup boats in a ballad’s swing, Or drown birds when they skyward rise. Always their roars and murmurs ring, And their echoes to seashells cling. Timeless tides do tirelessly sound A castaway’s lonesome refrain No other hears for miles around. Whale song in fathomless depths hides, A soft hymn to a blue domain, With bright greetings in bass disguise. To this serenade dolphins bring Voices gifted to pierce and sing, Trilling notes for the seabed bound, A dirge for shipwrecks deeply lain No other hears for miles around. Above, a stealthy whaler glides, On the music is fury trained That with Poseidon’s tantrum vies. Into the blue thunder bolts rain, On white foam leave a crimson stain, Marking a new burial ground, And song turns into cries of pain No other hears for miles around. Into the air flying fish wing, Confetti of fright often found, Fleeing whales’ wails so ghostly faint, No other hears for miles around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/2/2017 7:35:00 PM
Love your imagery, Bernard. I can feel the vastness and depth of the ocean. Kathy
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Bernard Chan
Date: 12/2/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2017 7:50:00 PM
So beautiful and tragic...your description of the ocean lured me in to be reminded of the whales (and many other species) merciless demise. Thanks for writing this wonderful piece :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/25/2017 10:01:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Chris. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/23/2017 6:01:00 PM
your poem has a great heart to it. thank you for sharing it.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/23/2017 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Patricia.
Date: 10/15/2017 7:17:00 PM
Wow this is a stunning write Bernard. Always beautiful in your artistry and imagery.., the content is also astounding. Your third verse is so very sad, a poignantly portrayed plight of the magnificent whales. Your lines and word choices simply brim with beauty, sadness and flair; 'confetti of fright', 'whales' wails', 'their echoes to seashells cling', 'swells cup boats'. The refrain is sad and stellar. Amazing!!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/15/2017 9:05:00 PM
Susan, thanks so much for your lovely words! You're very kind as usual :))

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