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Song of the Desert

Nomad fought for a fabled gap in the skies, adrift. Seeking solace in the unknown, a soul to uplift The sun casts an even brighter sphere in the air. Guiding the wanderer with a gentle flare. Ravens fly into the void, tearing sadness apart. Their wings, a symbol of hope, ignited the heart.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2023 5:14:00 AM

- Beautiful, Las :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/5/2023 10:32:00 PM

Congratulations talented poet you deserve all the recognition

Jay Narain

Date: 8/26/2023 12:00:00 PM

Beautiful poem with vivid imagery.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/26/2023 6:00:00 AM

As always i must highlight and praise your sublime rhyme and the flow of your words and how you do poetic storytelling so eloquently. I absolutely love the alliterations and the imagery: especially “ seeking solace in the unknown “ thats a brilliant and very resonating line. “ ravens fly into void tearing sadness apart” so moving and evocative. Journey of finding solace through hope so poetically depicted

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/26/2023 5:20:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in every line, Lasaad. A lovely write my friend. Much enjoyed.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 3:53:00 AM

Oh wow, such a richly evocative and flamboyant piece that illustrates the symphony of light amidst the dark through unfathomed alignments. "Their wings, a symbol of hope, ignited the heart" That really reflects strength and power. A thoughtfully crafted piece, with spellbinding rhymes, captivating wordplay and evocative depth, so wonderful!