Song of the Desert

Nomad fought for a fabled gap in the skies, adrift. Seeking solace in the unknown, a soul to uplift The sun casts an even brighter sphere in the air. Guiding the wanderer with a gentle flare. Ravens fly into the void, tearing sadness apart. Their wings, a symbol of hope, ignited the heart.
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Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 5:14 AM
- Beautiful, Las :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations talented poet you deserve all the recognition
Narain Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Beautiful poem with vivid imagery.
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 6:00 AM
As always i must highlight and praise your sublime rhyme and the flow of your words and how you do poetic storytelling so eloquently. I absolutely love the alliterations and the imagery: especially “ seeking solace in the unknown “ thats a brilliant and very resonating line. “ ravens fly into void tearing sadness apart” so moving and evocative. Journey of finding solace through hope so poetically depicted
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Beautiful imagery in every line, Lasaad. A lovely write my friend. Much enjoyed.
Sharma  Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:53 AM
Oh wow, such a richly evocative and flamboyant piece that illustrates the symphony of light amidst the dark through unfathomed alignments. "Their wings, a symbol of hope, ignited the heart" That really reflects strength and power. A thoughtfully crafted piece, with spellbinding rhymes, captivating wordplay and evocative depth, so wonderful!
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