Song of Solomon Written In Haiku

lovely woman- - follow tracks of the sheep; by shepherd tents graze a favorite mare harnessed by Pharaoh- - beside you it pales your beautiful eyes sparkle the dark of midnight- - I feel your breath
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December 12, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Sara's "Song Of Solomon" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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December 12, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Happy Holidays, Charles. Congrats on this different sort of approach to the Song of Solomon Contest...The second one is my favorite. ....Your Avatar with your grandson(?) is precious to0. Gwendolen
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December 10, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your entry being in the winners' circle..I appreciate you participating in my contest..I am glad that you understood the comparisons by the King..Sara
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December 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Charles, congratulations in Sara's contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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November 19, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Very creative, Charles. Kim
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November 18, 2011 at 4:52 PM
This is beautiful Charles. I received your comment and have figured out how to turn the soupmail on. So please send your message when you have time.
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