Song of Blackbird

all ears early morn'
notes clear from yonder coppice ~
blackbird plays it's flute



A Hiku Premier Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 12/26/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 11:31 AM
So lovely and full of nature's charm at dawn Edward!!! I love the last line that is full of your originality. Congratulations on your win! Love the vivid imagery! Happy New Year! Sending you blessings of joy!
Ibeh Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sam:-) Peace and <3
Zahid Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Beautiful imagery. Loved it. May the New Year bless you with health, wealth, and happiness Edward
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Thank you so much, Paghunda:-) Same to you, my friend.
Milgate Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 12:40 AM
very nice, will remember the blackbird plays it's flute, wonderful.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Great imagery of sound, Edward. Congrats on your win
Ibeh Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 2:39 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Ashley Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Dear Edward, your Hiku captures the music of the morning so beautifully. Love this poem. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and congratulations, Susan:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "blackbird plays it's flute." I can hear/see them. A fun write. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
Ibeh Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very, Paula:-)
Kitchin Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 3:11 AM
Ed, a beautiful poem, I can hear the musical chirping, congratulations on your winning placement!
Ibeh Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much, Tania:-) Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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