Song For a Carriage

Carriage of soul
Wanders alone
In thought. The bone
From rails creaking.

Nightingale dips
To warble, sing.
Hymns on upswing
Drive soul afire.



Ride On A Pathya Vat
nette onclaud contest ( carriage)
posted by Rora Onna, 3 August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Wow what a great image! well done!!!
Guzzi Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Awesome write Rora! congrats on great win!
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:25 AM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Carriage of soul, nice interpretation, Rora, congrats.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:23 AM
Lovely take on the carriage theme. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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