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8/9/2026 for Pyramid Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

SONG

SONG
a voice
melody

the record player
in my big brothers' room
magical seventy-eights

"my musical friend and savior"

Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2026

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2026 at 1:27 AM

Oh wow. 78's. That really dates someone!! This was a really worthy win. Congrats

August 31, 2026 at 12:06 PM

Yep, I had those little 78s, some of them were colored yellow, and also, some 45s. Some of those little records had cartoon pictures on them. I also remember my mom had these really thick, hard 78s in her closet, that were records from when she was younger, stuff like Tommy Dorsey (swing era),.

August 29, 2026 at 1:29 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. I was delighted to see your name there. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.

August 31, 2026 at 12:04 PM

Thanks, Sara!

August 29, 2026 at 12:10 PM

David, congratulations on your 1st Prize win. I am so proud to share the podium with you.

August 29, 2026 at 2:31 PM

Thanks Pascal!

August 29, 2026 at 8:35 AM

Very nicely done David, Congrats on your win

August 29, 2026 at 2:30 PM

Thanks, Joseph - it was fun!

Paula Goldsmith

August 9, 2026 at 1:09 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun "SONG" write. Music is a great thing. "Good Luck" Enjoy your fun day writing away.............

August 9, 2026 at 4:17 PM

Thanks, Paula - glad you liked it. Agreed! Have a great evening!

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