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SONG birds sing people hear hit play and sit back absorb sweet melody move body to the music "straight through the roof, serotonin" Pyramids Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Joseph May Date written: 09/13/2020

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Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 2:44:00 PM

Very nicely done Edward, Congrats on your win..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/21/2020 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement, Joe:-) Most obliged.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:58:00 PM

what an awesome final line . So true!! I really like your choice of theme and how you described it. Congrats on the win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/21/2020 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 11:59:00 AM

- So sweet melody, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/13/2020 11:47:00 AM

Hello Edward , I like this song. I can se couples dancing to the beat of the song.Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2020 10:37:00 AM

Hello Edward, yes I do like this love song. I enjoy Love Songs. Have a nice day my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/13/2020 4:07:00 PM

I'm glad you love this song poem, Darlene:-) Have a blessed day, friend!