Notes About The Poem

Song

SONG
                      birds sing
                     people hear

               hit play and sit back
              absorb sweet melody
            move body to the music

   "straight through the roof, serotonin"


 Pyramids Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Joseph May
Date written: 09/13/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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May Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Very nicely done Edward, Congrats on your win..
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Joe:-) Most obliged.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM
what an awesome final line . So true!! I really like your choice of theme and how you described it. Congrats on the win.
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 11:59 AM
- So sweet melody, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Hello Edward , I like this song. I can se couples dancing to the beat of the song.Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 10:37 AM
Hello Edward, yes I do like this love song. I enjoy Love Songs. Have a nice day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 4:07 PM
I'm glad you love this song poem, Darlene:-) Have a blessed day, friend!
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