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shooting star - will my wish weigh it down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/27/2023 1:07:00 PM
wow, excellent senryu!!!
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Date: 6/27/2023 11:27:00 AM
I don't know what your wish is, Sneha, but you are a wise 'girl' so I believe that it is one that makes sense; may it come true :) Regards // paul
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Date: 6/25/2023 10:16:00 AM
A gem of a poem - I hope your dreams come true my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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