sonder

shooting star -
     will my wish 
  weigh it down
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Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 1:07 PM
wow, excellent senryu!!!
Callus Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 11:27 AM
I don't know what your wish is, Sneha, but you are a wise 'girl' so I believe that it is one that makes sense; may it come true :) Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:16 AM
A gem of a poem - I hope your dreams come true my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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