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Somewhere In Time

An unforeseen future Nestled somewhere in time Unsuspecting victims No warnings No signs Creeping along the sides Tick tock Tick tock The bells run off And the clocks stand still The ground shakes And the sea roars These are the powers of time Hour and minute hands Ticking away Each second that goes by Something happens A new life is born A life is lost Let us join Hand in hand And hope that time Will be on our side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2010 11:49:00 AM
Excellent write! Susan
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:10:00 PM
i love how you put the words i suggested into here! it goes so smothly and flows perfectly. good job :) ------Ell
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:09:00 AM
Wow. Your incrediable. Great poems you write relly just awesome
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:54:00 PM
how about: and the clocks stand still, the ground shakes and the sea roars... work it from there ;) ------Ell
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