Somewhat of a Slam I Guess???

I can feel the tension in the air!
We all line up as lightning starts to shine!
Don't like the way I stare? Well you can go to hell!
Don't tell me what I can or can not do. It's my life and I'll island hop if I want.
Hey, Mr.No History just learned a new term!
You want to get into rhymes, well then I'm sorry you picked the wrong time!
I'm about to go to bed, tell your mom I said hi.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 27, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Yes. John the mid part is a slam.. a little Xool slam.. enjoyed... Enjoyed your poem:-) take care..p.d.
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August 19, 2010 at 6:42 PM
JOhn, hope you have a good night...I need to hit the hay myself!
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August 19, 2010 at 10:41 AM
I am wishing you a wonderful day full of inspiration John. I thank you for sharing your poetry today. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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