Sometimes I Feel

Sometimes I feel like A wilted rose, pressed between Pages in a book.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2018 9:11:00 PM

Thanks for expressing precisely how I feel today... We need that magic elixir in "Dr. Heidegger's experiment!" … The first word in your poem, "Sometimes" is the key. There ARE other, better times ahead, my friend!! Season's best, Gershon

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 7:42:00 AM

Exactly, Gershon. You are welcome and thank you for reading and commenting.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/15/2018 9:38:00 AM

Oh, that is harsh - I am picturing you smashed, brittle, brown, starting to crumble.... Not that I have not been there, it is that I want to save what is left.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 6:10:00 PM

Ever have a multi-day migraine? It'll do that to you. If you've been there then that's why it was so easy to picture. Thanks.