Sometimes

Life is a challenge, seems it's always a fight
Kept on our toes, fists balled up tight
But every so often there's an ease of its grip
it'll loosen just slightly to present a small dip
Uphill we must climb to notice, it's small but it's bright
To see it so clearly...This break!  What a sight!
To just dive for the opening and coast for a mile
could really help out, even just for a while
But because we're all different, diverse, and unique
moments of clarity, each come when we seek
It's our own burden, to escape to good thoughts
Deciding that sometimes, we 'can' call the shots
Sometimes it's a treasure lost long ago
or maybe some good news, that lifts us up so
Sometimes it is music, that fills us with hope
It can make our heart dance and seemingly float
Sometimes it's a child or a puppy's big eyes
That, just for a moment...make good thoughts arise
Or maybe it's not...what we touch, hear, or see
It could be a feeling that yearns to be free
Just happy to be alive can stop gloom in our head
To realize all the beauty, around us instead
A life must be lived because time 'will' go by
Regardless of worries or stress that we cry
                 ***
For 'You' are the star, this movie you're in
It's all up to you, embrace where you've been
Sometimes it's best, all the pain to endure
so the good that is 'in' you, can surface so pure
You've been there and made it, don't dwell on the bad
Go for that break, be the light you once had
Sometimes that opening is a sign of some peace
and it's yours to take hold of, for a mile at least
And... 
Sometimes, if you feel just a little bit stronger
You'll hold tight to that goodness, just a little bit longer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/25/2016 7:24:00 PM
this has a new rewritten version in my home page
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Date: 3/15/2016 5:18:00 PM
Diane, you expressed the strength of another well. SKAT
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Okanagan Bell
Date: 4/6/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words. I like you. I am glad you are seeing my pattern, I write from the heart in hopes to give a little perspective to someone in the same kind of situation, that is why they are not specific. I know we all have stuff that happens that we react to before thinking and it never ends well. I hope I can clarify things for someone anyway.
Date: 3/14/2016 5:08:00 PM
I like the verse and message, Diane.. Linda
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Okanagan Bell
Date: 4/6/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thank you very much. It makes me very happy to know my message is getting out. In a nice versey way. Read on.
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