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Sometimes

Sometimes life seems to slither along so well, Other times it appears to be some ethereal foil And all I see is the vanity of the fleeting breath, The uselessness of labor and the airs of tiring toil.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2015 6:41:00 PM

This a well written piece about the mysteries of life. I really appreciated what you wrote. It had me thinking about life in general. Have I made my count?...etc Thanks. -Alexis

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/15/2015 7:44:00 AM

Life is so mysterious! And I liked your poem which many of us can connect with. Those times happens to all of us occasionally. But when I get this type of day, I stop and ponder. What is God trying to teach or show me? And what lesson can I learn about this experience? A 7 rating. I hope today is a magnificent one for you. Thanks for visiting my poem ..Darlene

Hannington Mumo
Date: 5/15/2015 8:51:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much dear. I'm thoroughly grateful.