Sometimes

Sometimes I feel you near
Close enough to touch your hand
To take you away from any fear
And fly away from this land

Sometimes I feel you far
Beyond the deep seas and high mountains
My heart is full of scars
From climbing and drowning

Sometimes I feel so lost
All the ways are the same
Can't find the one to adore most
And no one else but me to blame

Sometimes I miss
The joy of life deep in your eye
Though I never been in their presence
Streams of wishes to feel its warmth before I die !

Sometimes I wonder
How much longer do I have to dive
Through caves of illusion and wells of thunder
How many days left to survive?

Sometimes I keep looking around
Among the sad and broken faces
Searching for the face I am bounded
The missing piece to solve my life mazes

Sometimes I feel empty inside
All colors get so pale
Like all what's left of happiness hide
Even the most perfect moments
Feel lifeless without you by my side 

Sometimes I feel time stops
And the earth stop spinning
That's when the thought of your existence drops
My heart can't stop racing
To leave my torn chest

Sometimes I drown in oceans of despair
And all my strings of hope tear
Feeling no one in the world still care
Undead
Unbounded
No more caves and mountains
No more joy deep in the eye
I bury it
I die

But One time
That moon shining moment
After all the falls and fails
I found the missing story to be told
The One last hope is left to hold
Written only in fairy tales !

==> 2 B continued … <==
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/10/2014 7:55:00 AM
Wow what a fabulous poem in rhyme n romance! Kudos poet. Pls review my latest poem too.
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