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Sometimes when people talk about her, I have to bite my tounge, I have to do this before I lose control. I have to stay silent, but yet try to tell them the real reasons why she did what she did, many ppl don't like her, but I love her. I have every since I was eight years old, does that make me a whore too?

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Date: 10/12/2011 11:58:00 AM
I like how you withheld who she was until the end - made it very dramatic and powerful, especially by ending it in a question. nicely done :)
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