Sometimes

Agendas in modern schedules,
drive us to our personal goals,
and we rarely look to the wayside,
where lies unfortunate souls,
whose dreams are lying in tatters,
dispirited with broken wings.
At these times showing respect, 
can lead to such wonderful things.

But sometimes we can’t see ahead,
because we’re secure in our feeling.
Sometimes security crumbles,  
and no one is there for the healing.

And so on the pathway to glory,
where rainbows guarantee gold,
think as you pocket your riches,
about a friend who is left in the cold.
Remember when in your struggle,
where the upward climb grew its thorns,
and remember who pulled you through,
with their wisdom in your early dawns.

Sometimes the comfort zone sprawl,
can lead to a lapse of the past,
that sometimes becomes the lesson,
required for a courteous cast.
For the scale of life has a balance,
that rises and falls with our greed.
Sometimes we may not be the needy,
and sometimes it’s us who may need.

But sometimes we can’t see ahead,
because we’re secure in our feeling.
Sometimes security crumbles,  
and no one is there for the healing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hendrickson Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 10:18 PM
unfortunate souls, whose dreams are lying in tatters...wonderful wordplay. I often see folks begging at intersections in my area. Do your words apply to them?A woman in a laundramat once asked me for 2 dollars. I stupidly asked what for."Do you really want to know?" I gave her 2 dollars (I was on vacation in Hawaii in 1986).
Laurie Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Hello Jim ... sometimes folk who have had the lot can lose it all when taking risks. Begging is turning into a big industry, and city streets can be full of homeless people - thanks for commenting Jim - Lindsay
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 3:06 AM
This is such a perfect and sound poetic wisdom! I was waiting for the punchline, but found wisdom and truth in your wonderful poem! I love this Lindsay!
Laurie Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 11:19 PM
Hello BJ ... this poem is a diversion from my normal humorous verses, and you are right. It is a tale about how we can treat others better so if our turn crops up, somebody may be there for us - thank you BJ - Lindsay
Schneiter Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Lindsay, every line rings with truth. Life has a way of turning the tables. Those we look down on today may be looking down on us tomorrow. Thus, it's not just the right thing to show love to every mortal, it's also the practical thing. Hugs & Love, Paul
Laurie Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:21 PM
Hello Paul ... the old adage, 'what goes around comes around' rings true in this poem - thank you for commenting Paul - Lindsay
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Wonderful write. Golden words spoken. Very inspiring!
Laurie Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 10:41 PM
Hello Rama ... thank you very much for your fine comment - Lindsay
Kulkarni Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 12:32 PM
What a brilliant write Lindsay!! Too often we get busy living in our own little bubble and forget to look around. Your words of wisdom are great reminders! Thank you!!
Laurie Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Hello Smita ... thank you very much for your positive comment Smita. Circumstances can deliver a savage blow that could consume any of us at any time - Lindsay
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May 25, 2021 at 2:16 AM
A wonderful write Lindsay and so true, we go through good times and bad, the bad times remind us to count the blessings we have… Belle
Laurie Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Hello Belle ... thank you for your fine comment Belle. Life can be like a roller coaster so yes, our blessings are very important indeed - Lindsay
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Aw wows what a beautiful pearls of wisdom inspiring words of poetry to think of others in need and your wonderful refrain reminder of how not to be secure in our own comfort zone thoughtless of others. Makes me think of poor Palestinians facing cruel death and destruction ah. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Hello zaynab ... this is a fine encouraging comment you posted zaynab; thank you, and yes I will your work and put up comments - thank you zaynab - Lindsay
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May 17, 2021 at 9:26 AM
It takes time to learn that we are all in this life together and we fail our missions if we neglect those in need. As you say, sometimes we are in need. I love this poem's call for unity and compassion, Lindsay. It's really quite remarkable. A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:18 PM
Hello Carolyn ... humanity should never stop searching for a way to help those in proper need instead of turning their heads away - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:44 AM
What you say rings so true in my ears, in South Africa we are still able to employ domestic staff, but we always pay her higher than the legal and required amount. And should I buy something new, a jersey, or a pair of shoes for instance, i will always give her the same in kind from what I have already. I feel it is only fair, however we do draw the line, a new car for example would be a no no! Maybe if I win the lottery one day. I really enjoyed this poem. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Hello Jennifer ... you are a very generous person Jennifer. If there were more people like you it would bring us all closer together - thanks for your beautiful comment Jennifer - Lindsay
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May 13, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Shelter under a bridge, the soup kitchen--there but for the grace of God go I! Wonderful, descriptive, moving poem, Lindsay. Janice
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:11 PM
Hello Janice ... and a very finf comment you posted once again that I do appreciate - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Excellent insight Lindsay. So often people are wont to look down their nose at someone sitting in the gutter in rags. When all they need is maybe someone to give the a hand up. As you say, sometimes we may be the needy one. It sure doesn't hurt to give someone a helping hand sometimes. You may save a life. Love this. A fave. God Bless, JB
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Hello Judy ... thank you for your insightful comment on this common social issue. The wheel can turn quickly and hardship can quickly change hands - thank you Judy - Lindsay
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 12:19 PM
This poem is somewhat different from your usual ones, Lindsay, but sometimes it does one good to go for a change. Your pleas will not fall on deaf ears. ~ Regards // paul
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Hello Paul ... yes, it is somewhat different to what I usually do post, but depending on my mood I guess, but I do enjoy poems on social issues too - thanks Paul - Lindsay
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May 13, 2021 at 6:39 AM
I really like this, Lindsay. It's an eloquent, touching appeal to be charitable. But it's more. It reminds us that one day we may find ourselves in need. We are all vulneable. We don' know what's ahead. Mortality has a way of springing nasty surprises. I confess that your words made me more supportive of those in need. Thank you. Hugs, Paul
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Hello Paul ... I can only agree with your fine comment Paul. We just never know what surprises can wait ahead of us - thanks Paul - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 3:01 PM
what a thoughtful and meaningful poem. Very well done, poet.
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Hello Andrea ... your comment is very encouraging Andrea - thank you - Lindsay
Sands Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Very nice poem Lindsay. I love the 3rd stanza! Well done :)
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Hello Heidi ... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this poem Heidi. I appreciate your comment - thanks Heidi - Lindsay
Hawkins Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 11:17 PM
There but for the grace of God go I. I loved this poem Lindsay. Thank you for sharing it... Shirley
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Hello Shirley ... it was a pleasure Shirley. I'm pleased you enjoyed it - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Wow this will go in a fav. Life can be hard at times and we never know what will be next for us down the road. Wish Joy a Happy Mother's day. Take care my friend. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Hello Phyllis ... thank you for posting another positive comment Phyllis. Joy had a nice mothers day although a very quiet one with the kids only able to ring her up - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 3:21 PM
Superb handling, Lindsy, of a topic most of us would rather avoid. Bravo, Gershon
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:24 PM
Hello there Gershon ... it is a difficult topic but it's very common over a period of time - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Luckily we have a deck of Tarot, crystal balls, horrorscopes, bamboo sticks, et al to help us see what is next .....Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:19 PM
Hello Rico ... and what we possibly see is our pockets empty searching for our future - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Michael Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 8:58 AM
It's not easy...but that's life...I like how you put it together...All the best to you.
Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Hello Arturo ... thank you for reading a placing a nice positive comment - Lindsay
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