Christopher Bunton Poet Tail-rhyme

Sometime

Warm sun shining on the tranquil hills.

Watching clouds with the daffodils.

Free from every need.


Running wild in dark forests green.

Sleeping naked in caves unseen.

Going where Love may lead.

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John Castro January 25, 2012 at 9:41 AM sounds to great to be true almost Christopher Bunton January 25, 2012 at 3:22 PM Yes, I felt the same way. That's why I called it sometime.

Poet Destroyer A January 24, 2012 at 5:33 PM Christopher, a sweet deal to follow love... and about that running wild... love that line... enjoyed,..p.d. Christopher Bunton January 24, 2012 at 8:10 PM Thank You!!

Dan Kearley January 24, 2012 at 5:16 PM Hey! Thanks for the comment on my Half chicken half dove poem.. I'm suprised this one didn't win? I like the flow of it...Keep'em comming. Christopher Bunton January 24, 2012 at 8:09 PM Thank You!!

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2012 at 8:37 PM This is a really beautiful tail-rhyme, Christopher. Christopher Bunton January 20, 2012 at 10:34 PM Thank You!!