Something Stirring

As night descends, casting darkness
all is silent and so very still
waiting, listening, and breathless

Into the dark of nights coldness
do you feel it, that stone cold chill
as night descends, casting darkness

The cold seeping chilling  denseness
it seems to invade , to instill
waiting, listening, and breathless

Something  stirring in the blackness
the noises now loud and so shrill
as night descends, casting darkness 

Death shows his face full of graveness
in the dark stands waiting to kill
waiting, listening and breathless 

Now life seeps away, its painless
just a gasp then it flees noiseless
as night descends, casting darkness
waiting, listening and breathless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bangalee Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Now life seeps away, its painless just a gasp then it flees noiseless as night descends, casting darkness waiting, listening and breathless....it's nice at last; I enjoyed this beautiful poem
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 4:05 PM
I could feel the cold, dense chill of the night with death coming near...a great use of the villanelle.
Babcock Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 5:08 PM
You can almost feel the grip of death-waiting, watching . Nicely done on this poem. love phyl
Hamilton Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:25 AM
ty Phyllis suspense is a great tool lol ty for kind remarks Linda
O'Leary Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Very nice! Terry
Hamilton Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:41 PM
hi Terry and ty happed you like it Linda
Tacito Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Gripping tone here! I like this! I enjoyed the consistent build-up. :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:15 AM
hi Drake ty dear I did my job then lol the build up so important glad you felt it Linda
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