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I have put the original write ancient modern With a slightly altered new version Something old something new For the contest of that name Thank you for reading!
I've found theres more to introspection On the flying wings of life As I try to plumb deeper depths with my Halo-genic light Yet I never see the shadows, though I suppose They must be there? Yet as long as they don't reflect on me I really couldn't care! Ancient modern (original poem) I've found there's more to introspection On the flying wings of like As I tried to plumb its recesses With my halo-genic light I've never seen the shadows though I suppose they Must be there, Yet as long as don't reflect on me I don't See I should really care

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Date: 10/21/2021 9:22:00 AM
A fine poem and the word halogenic sounds very poetic wow. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 10/18/2021 4:01:00 PM
Hello Joe, I like this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 10/18/2021 1:47:00 PM
I don't know this song at all, but it's cool that you chose it and did your own version, Joe.
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Date: 10/18/2021 1:05:00 PM
love the twist on the original poem Joe:-) hugs jan xx
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