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Something Old Something New

Like a bird that is free One may come back or just be Very hard if your love does not return Everyone in life must learn Date Written:9/29/2021 1 Place Note: Acrostic Rhyme SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Set It Free Love~Set It Free Only when it comes back to you is it meant to be Very hard when love does not return Everyone has been in this class to learn Date Written: 9/2/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your well deserved top win! Enjoyed both versions :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 12:00:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like both of these Rhyme Acrostic writes. Have a blessed day.......................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/5/2021 11:07:00 PM

Nicely done acrostic...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this acrostic one. Have a blessed day.......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2021 5:23:00 PM

Nicely done, Paula. Was putting the One out to the far right part of the change you wanted to make? (maybe it is not supposed to be that way? Look and see how it looks from our end)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Thanks about the line. I do not understand how it can look good when I put it in and then be off. I fixed it. Hope it will stay. Have a blessed/week.......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2021 3:15:00 PM

A lovely Acrostic, Paula, I wish you luck with the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/29/2021 1:37:00 PM

A cute one!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2021 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this cute write. Have a blessed day.......................