Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Something Old Something New

Like a bird that is free                                                                                                                                                   One may come back or just be                                                                                                                      
Very hard if your love does not return                                                                                              
Everyone in life must learn                                                            

Date Written:9/29/2021

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Note: Acrostic Rhyme
SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW Poetry Contest                                                                           
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Set It Free                                                                                    

Love~Set It Free                                                                                                 Only when it comes back to you is it meant to be                                                      Very hard when love does not return                                                                    Everyone has been in this class to learn                                                  

Date Written: 9/2/2021        Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Unseeking Seeker June 8, 2022 at 7:56 PM Congrats Paula on your well deserved top win! Enjoyed both versions :) Paula Goldsmith June 9, 2022 at 12:00 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like both of these Rhyme Acrostic writes. Have a blessed day.......................

Delice Arleen Skelly October 5, 2021 at 11:07 PM Nicely done acrostic...Delice Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this acrostic one. Have a blessed day.......................

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2021 at 5:23 PM Nicely done, Paula. Was putting the One out to the far right part of the change you wanted to make? (maybe it is not supposed to be that way? Look and see how it looks from our end) Paula Goldsmith October 4, 2021 at 9:58 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Thanks about the line. I do not understand how it can look good when I put it in and then be off. I fixed it. Hope it will stay. Have a blessed/week.......................

Sotto Poet September 29, 2021 at 3:15 PM A lovely Acrostic, Paula, I wish you luck with the contest. Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2021 at 8:45 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this Acrostic write. Have a blessed day.......................

Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2021 at 1:37 PM A cute one! Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2021 at 8:44 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this cute write. Have a blessed day.......................