Something New

Am doing a new thing 
A thing that sings a new song 
A song that dongs a new hit 
Am hitting a high note 
Freezes your muscle throat
Whilst behooving to a new quote
Stepping up to mend the broken walks 

A walk into miles of eternity
A word outspoken can never be softspoken 
I wish to say a word that would inspire
It's a new thing to acquire  
A new style to admire 
An admiration that leaves your sensation without contemplation
Doing a new thing 

Swimming along with the waves 
Flying arms wide open with the doves 
Stunning like the cloves 
    And fufilling a life like the full moon 
       on the winter solstice 
    A smile in the sky!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Belated congratulations on your wonderful POTD! Cheers, Connie
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Hi Memory, WoW! This piece was so positive from start to finish. You have penned a beautiful song. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you for the support. I appreciate and lots of love :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:34 AM
This is a wonderful piece of writing. So much inspiration it brings...Congrats on your POTD! :D Sunita
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:12 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Memory Melania ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Hi Anne-Lise!!! Thanks a lot...Best regards :)
Scars Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 9:54 AM
congrats on potd! :)-luloo
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thanks a lot Luloo!!! Best regards :) Memory-M
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:25 AM
An excellent choice for POTD.
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Richard!!! :) Best regards
Sergi Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Great poem with a beautiful rhythm, Melania!
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Hi Ralph!!! Thanks a lot. Best regards :) Melania
Fleming Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Always a pleasure to read poetry from a differently viewed perspective than ones own: Reminding us all that there are always two sides to the same coin. Powerfully phrased with an undeniable Rap rhythm underpinning it all - Enjoyed! My best regards, Memory. :) john
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Hi John!!! Thanks for the comment...poerty is something amazing that modifies things in an artistic way. Am humbled and Best regards :)
Turner Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 7:10 AM
This is such a positive and uplifting fun poem. Congratulations on POTD, Melania.
Mutanuka Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Hi Daniel!! Lots of appreciation for the comment!!! My best regards :)
Kaumba Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Excellent Dear...
Mutanuka Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Thank you!!!! :)
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