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something new a kiss from you on the cheek something neat did it make my heart flutter all my pride melted like butter alone but not lonely i ride with God telling Him the story while He just nods my joy elated like the joy of my youth nothing has changed only the view am i entering the spiders web when it is over will i be dead or will i be captured in loves gentile grip together grow old or till God's Kingdom sent either i enter heaven or either i enter hell right now it's heaven save my soul not hell someone very special i choose to give my heart dares to light my fire by giving it a spark

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Date: 3/30/2010 5:37:00 AM
How cute. Like it . From the green one!
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:46:00 PM
So nice when you meet a special person in your life. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/10/2010 4:28:00 PM
I enjoyed the sweetness in your poetry today.
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Date: 3/9/2010 2:50:00 PM
Nope I am from Ga, mashed buttons and toted stuff.
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Date: 3/6/2010 4:36:00 PM
I especially like the last stanza. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:51:00 PM
John~ You've been freed unblocked show me I did the right thing! Laura :)
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dear John. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:54:00 AM
Im thinking of that song'Relight my fire':)..form the last stanza..Lovely poem..John ,you know how to do it indeed..Charma
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:38:00 AM
LOving and sensitive. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem John! ....Enjoyed.......Lea
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:54:00 PM
sweet write..made me smile :)
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