John Loving Iii Poet Rhyme

Something New

something new
a kiss from you
on the cheek
something neat

did it make 
my heart flutter
all my pride
melted like butter

alone but not lonely
i ride with God
telling Him the story
while He just nods

my joy elated
like the joy of my youth
nothing has changed
only the view

am i entering the 
spiders web
when it is over
will i be dead

or will i be captured
in loves gentile grip
together grow old
or till God's Kingdom sent

either i enter heaven 
or either i enter hell
right now it's heaven
save my soul not hell

someone very special
i choose to give my heart
dares to light my fire
by giving it a spark

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Skat A March 30, 2010 at 5:37 AM How cute. Like it . From the green one!

Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2010 at 8:46 PM So nice when you meet a special person in your life. God Bless Phyl

Skat A March 10, 2010 at 4:28 PM I enjoyed the sweetness in your poetry today.

Doris Culverhouse March 9, 2010 at 2:50 PM Nope I am from Ga, mashed buttons and toted stuff.

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2010 at 4:36 PM I especially like the last stanza. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Laura Mckenzie March 3, 2010 at 9:51 PM John~ You've been freed unblocked show me I did the right thing! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2010 at 12:22 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dear John. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop March 2, 2010 at 11:54 AM Im thinking of that song'Relight my fire':)..form the last stanza..Lovely poem..John ,you know how to do it indeed..Charma

Daver Austin March 2, 2010 at 4:38 AM LOving and sensitive. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver

Lea O'Brien March 1, 2010 at 5:57 PM Beautiful poem John! ....Enjoyed.......Lea

Autumn Page March 1, 2010 at 5:54 PM sweet write..made me smile :)