Something New

something new
a kiss from you
on the cheek
something neat

did it make 
my heart flutter
all my pride
melted like butter

alone but not lonely
i ride with God
telling Him the story
while He just nods

my joy elated
like the joy of my youth
nothing has changed
only the view

am i entering the 
spiders web
when it is over
will i be dead

or will i be captured
in loves gentile grip
together grow old
or till God's Kingdom sent

either i enter heaven 
or either i enter hell
right now it's heaven
save my soul not hell

someone very special
i choose to give my heart
dares to light my fire
by giving it a spark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/30/2010 5:37:00 AM
How cute. Like it . From the green one!
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:46:00 PM
So nice when you meet a special person in your life. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/10/2010 4:28:00 PM
I enjoyed the sweetness in your poetry today.
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Date: 3/9/2010 2:50:00 PM
Nope I am from Ga, mashed buttons and toted stuff.
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Date: 3/6/2010 4:36:00 PM
I especially like the last stanza. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:51:00 PM
John~ You've been freed unblocked show me I did the right thing! Laura :)
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dear John. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:54:00 AM
Im thinking of that song'Relight my fire':)..form the last stanza..Lovely poem..John ,you know how to do it indeed..Charma
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:38:00 AM
LOving and sensitive. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem John! ....Enjoyed.......Lea
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:54:00 PM
sweet write..made me smile :)
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