Something More

Something in your face
something kind and warm
and something with a trace 
of sexy 
like the rain in an excitable storm
Something in your words
and in the lines of what's unsaid 
drew me to you 
like a  ball of string or thread
something to unravel
a mystery in your eyes
something exciting, a sweet surprise
So hold the cup, take a sip 
taste the sweetness of friendship 
I'd like to know what makes you tick
and all there is to know
but hunnie there is no rush, 
So let's just take it slow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Inka Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 1:59 AM
Like it alot well done
Patrick Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 9:14 AM
love it allie!! hope all is well! wishing you return soon <3
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Such tongue in cheek is marvelous! Light & Love
Breidenthal Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 5:14 PM
How adorable! I very much liked this poem! It spoke to me, and it was over all just fantastic. Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Wow....very well written Allie. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Lusha Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 10:20 AM
You hum & I'll sing it... thanks Tony
Lane Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 9:45 AM
It sounds like a song to me. Tony
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