Someplace comfortable and warm

The nights now seem a little colder,
Each morn I wake a little older,
My view of life keeps getting bleaker,
And my will keeps growing weaker.
That star has dimmed that used to guide me
And helped me when I lost my way,
And though there's no one here beside me
Somehow I still get through each day.
But life is just what I have made it,
I've some remorse but few regrets.
When comes the end, I won't evade it
But hope that the reward I get
Is someplace far away from harm,
Someplace comfortable and warm.

Author's note: Dear reader, I'm considering this to be a sort of elegy for my **th birthday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Bauer Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 5:14 PM
you have expressed this so well, jim! very moving and profound. whatever birthday this is and whenever it is, hope it's one that makes you happy and, yes, comfortable and warm (i don't mean in the final sense!)...
Slaughter Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Thanks, Ilene...and, no, I'm not quite there...yet.
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