Someplace comfortable and warm

The nights now seem a little colder,
Each morn I wake a little older,
My view of life keeps getting bleaker,
And my will keeps growing weaker.
That star has dimmed that used to guide me
And helped me when I lost my way,
And though there's no one here beside me
Somehow I still get through each day.
But life is just what I have made it,
I've some remorse but few regrets.
When comes the end, I won't evade it
But hope that the reward I get
Is someplace far away from harm,
Someplace comfortable and warm.

Author's note: Dear reader, I'm considering this to be a sort of elegy for my **th birthday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/23/2025 5:14:00 PM
you have expressed this so well, jim! very moving and profound. whatever birthday this is and whenever it is, hope it's one that makes you happy and, yes, comfortable and warm (i don't mean in the final sense!)...
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Date: 5/24/2025 9:48:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene...and, no, I'm not quite there...yet.
Date: 5/23/2025 11:13:00 AM
I think we all want that comfortable warm place Jim. For me, my hope is to live in a world without suffering and death. Are you going to keep us in suspense about your age? I'll be 64 in August
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Date: 5/23/2025 1:45:00 PM
You're a spring chicken, Tom. Unfortunately, I don't think a world such as you hope for will ever exist. Alas. Thank you for your comments.
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