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Someone's Dream

~Someone's Dream~ A dream is just a vision, From deep within the mind Believing in it you release it, No longer keeping it confined Allowing the mind to cradle it, It then becomes a goal to support and nurture it, In the depths of your soul It must be felt by your heart, Only then will it submit A dream turned into reality, A dream that's now legit Acting as a flower would, Growing from just a seed Blooming it has a journey, A desire to be freed Breathe life into the dream, Give it a chance to live committed there's no limit  To what It can even give From a vision in ones mind, to a goal all easier then it seems Proving everything in life begin from someone's dream

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Date: 11/24/2019 6:24:00 AM
Brenda you couldn’t have posted this in better timing for me to read. Thank you for sharing this piece for me t keep close to heart!!!! INK
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/24/2019 7:16:00 AM
Ahh thank you G! I really appreciate your warm comments and the read! You are far to kind to me but I'm likin it!;)
Date: 11/23/2019 9:13:00 AM
I really enjoy reading your rhyming poetry when it skips joyfully along like this so delightfully does...puts me in mind of the busy tinkling of a tripping little stream. Lovely verse! Lots of warmest thoughts. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
As I always enjoy your comments dear John! Thank you so very much!;) hugs!;)
Date: 11/20/2019 4:35:00 PM
A lovely dreamy write Brenda, it takes one to wish one's dreams come true. Nicely done indeed. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2019 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Gordon! Your visits are always a pleasure!;)
Date: 11/20/2019 3:23:00 AM
Such deep thoughtful wisdom, Bre C! I believe you, lady. Will apply poetess keen kernels of dream knowledge to my presently "woke" condition. Seriously LOVE your state of ink play! This poetic dream weaver is going in the Fave file. Love and and best wishes for the holiday.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2019 4:32:00 AM
Ahh Freddie you are too kind my friend thank you so much!;)
Date: 11/19/2019 12:21:00 PM
Sweet positive words here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2019 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Matthew I appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 11/19/2019 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful write, beautiful penned. Hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2019 4:31:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia so much!;)
Date: 11/18/2019 8:34:00 AM
Does this dream involve unicorns? lol...I'm dreaming of my sissy writing beautiful poetry...bro bro :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/18/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thank you bro bro! As I dream of you writing your gorgeous poetry!;)
Date: 11/17/2019 10:41:00 PM
Hi Brenda this is very good. The words flowed beautifully. Thanks for sharing this
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/18/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Gregory! So sweet of you!;)

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