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Someone With It All

To just be able to touch you To feel you stroking my cheek To once just be the one to Make your knees go weak Oh I would give anything To feel you next to me How my heart does sing For you to let it be Your soft and tender lips Like pillows on your face A trembling below my hips Whenever I’m in your space You just hug me tight And I am jelly all inside It feels like all is right And my pain has died Let me be the only one To make your smile never fall To help you finally become Someone with it all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 10:28:00 AM
QUITE EMOTIONAL REALLY LIKED IT A LOT THANK FOR SUCH A LOVELY POEM DO READ MINE TOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:27:00 AM
QUITE EMOTIONAL REALLY LIKED IT A LOT THANK FOR SUCH A LOVELY POEM DO READ MINE TOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/14/2013 8:22:00 AM
Heart & Soul poetry! Platinum Penned Elissa! Love shines! my best, chuck
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Date: 12/9/2013 10:20:00 AM
The whole package. The sunrise & sunsets of their hearts. Simple, yet tremendous in its emotional message.
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:39:00 AM
Nice emotional expressions on love, Elissa
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