Someone Please Help Me

It's just a mini breakdown, nothing that a shot of whisky won't fix
a scratch
a nick
a heavy pail
and nothing helped

it's just a cry for help now
nothing that a pill or rest can't mend
so tired
so low
get back on the horse again

Oh Lord i'm such a failure
I've let my loved ones down 
this cloud over my heart bursts
how do I get up out of bed today

There's nothing left to lift 
I feel numb, can't even feel your kiss
I really need someway out of this
someone please help me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 14, 2018 at 6:36 AM
So many are suffering and don't know what to do...a very conscious poem indeed...I like it...All the best
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March 13, 2018 at 2:45 PM
A sad poem, I hope you get the help you need..
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