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Someday,Sometime

when I can see you in their eyes and not grieve perhaps I shall heal

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Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 11:29:00 PM

a heartfelt senryu. Love SKAT

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/17/2015 7:57:00 AM

Tim, this just tugs at this reader's heart. You've managed to put a lump in my throat in 3 lines...I hope, in time...you'll be over the grief. Big hugs!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/17/2015 6:20:00 AM

just spotted this little one, well, i say 'little one', but a little one that says something massive...very poignant...i always think there's something about this time of year that seems to bring loss to the fore...hope you are ok, dear man

Tim Ryerson
Date: 11/17/2015 6:30:00 AM

Hanging in there dear lady and might I add beautiful? Hope you are OK too...From your kind and thoughtful comments it appears to be so...