Someday,Sometime

when I can see you
in their eyes and not grieve
perhaps I shall heal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 17, 2015 at 11:29 PM
a heartfelt senryu. Love SKAT
Nunez Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Tim, this just tugs at this reader's heart. You've managed to put a lump in my throat in 3 lines...I hope, in time...you'll be over the grief. Big hugs!
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November 17, 2015 at 6:20 AM
just spotted this little one, well, i say 'little one', but a little one that says something massive...very poignant...i always think there's something about this time of year that seems to bring loss to the fore...hope you are ok, dear man
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November 17, 2015 at 6:30 AM
Hanging in there dear lady and might I add beautiful? Hope you are OK too...From your kind and thoughtful comments it appears to be so...
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