Someday Again

driftwood--
                                                    someday again
                                                  another shoreline
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Johnson Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Deja Vu all over again. Another lesson to put down in pen. A sailing ship from sea to shore. To find the peace we knew before.
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 3:25 PM
hahaha... good thing you don't put those technical terms in your poems... imagine words like " tachometer" " circuit breaker", " ampere, wattage"... i'm having electrical repairs done at home so i got those words came from my electrician.. my load is over tripping, he said... what?.. but some engineering terms can be poetic.. i once used " sockets of eyes" here on soup, lol!..:)
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#199" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 12:05 PM
A suberb haiku - congratulations.
Collins Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 10:57 AM
What a wistful picture of renewal, Kash. love, Kathy
Liwayway Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 11:40 PM
Congrats friend Kash...
A   Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Kash, congrats in Brian's contest..xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 12:41 PM
I'm so pleased that Brian liked your haiku. A VERY WEll deserved win. It's great to share a top placement with you, Kash, in one of Brian's contests. I am on pins and needles always wondering if I will place or not in that guy's contests.
O'Leary Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Another super one... Congratulations on your win... Terry
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kash!!!! hugs:)
Sefunmi Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on your win! You must teach me how you cleverly use this form. lol
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 8:05 PM
Hi, Kash. yeah, three poems too close together. But there are so many contests going on right now. I still have two to post before Sunday!!
Onclaud Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 9:07 AM
happy friday, kashi... looking forward to your next gem!... hope to write while i'm out of town for 2 days.. :) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 5:14 AM
perfect imagery Kash.. many things have redirected in the sea ... an awesome view luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:11 PM
beautiful, Kashinath. And what's with the foreign words you left me in your comment?
Horsman Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:23 PM
powerful haiku, kash
Onclaud Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 11:40 AM
supercalifragelisticexpialidocious, kashi!..:) huggs!
Horne Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 8:28 AM
love this one, Kash
Sivey Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 6:40 AM
As one meanders through life one would eventually find a shore, solid ground of which to walk on! You have written exquisitely my friend! I love this incredible piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 4:23 AM
Super haiku, dear friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Okoedion Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:09 AM
Splendid. The structure speaks the meaning on its own. Nice one cash.
Williams Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 2:19 AM
Kash, just an amazing vision....David
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August 23, 2012 at 1:49 AM
how melancholy. excellent haiku. Cindy
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