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someday again

driftwood-- someday again another shoreline

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/25/2012 6:10:00 AM
Deja Vu all over again. Another lesson to put down in pen. A sailing ship from sea to shore. To find the peace we knew before.
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Date: 9/7/2012 3:25:00 PM
hahaha... good thing you don't put those technical terms in your poems... imagine words like " tachometer" " circuit breaker", " ampere, wattage"... i'm having electrical repairs done at home so i got those words came from my electrician.. my load is over tripping, he said... what?.. but some engineering terms can be poetic.. i once used " sockets of eyes" here on soup, lol!..:)
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#199" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:33:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:05:00 PM
A suberb haiku - congratulations.
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:57:00 AM
What a wistful picture of renewal, Kash. love, Kathy
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:40:00 PM
Congrats friend Kash...
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:25:00 PM
Kash, congrats in Brian's contest..xox~pd
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Date: 8/25/2012 12:41:00 PM
I'm so pleased that Brian liked your haiku. A VERY WEll deserved win. It's great to share a top placement with you, Kash, in one of Brian's contests. I am on pins and needles always wondering if I will place or not in that guy's contests.
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:33:00 AM
Another super one... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kash!!!! hugs:)
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win! You must teach me how you cleverly use this form. lol
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Date: 8/24/2012 8:05:00 PM
Hi, Kash. yeah, three poems too close together. But there are so many contests going on right now. I still have two to post before Sunday!!
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Date: 8/24/2012 9:07:00 AM
happy friday, kashi... looking forward to your next gem!... hope to write while i'm out of town for 2 days.. :) huggs!
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:14:00 AM
perfect imagery Kash.. many things have redirected in the sea ... an awesome view luv..
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:11:00 PM
beautiful, Kashinath. And what's with the foreign words you left me in your comment?
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Date: 8/23/2012 3:23:00 PM
powerful haiku, kash
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Date: 8/23/2012 11:40:00 AM
supercalifragelisticexpialidocious, kashi!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/23/2012 8:28:00 AM
love this one, Kash
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Date: 8/23/2012 6:40:00 AM
As one meanders through life one would eventually find a shore, solid ground of which to walk on! You have written exquisitely my friend! I love this incredible piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/23/2012 4:23:00 AM
Super haiku, dear friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2012 3:09:00 AM
Splendid. The structure speaks the meaning on its own. Nice one cash.
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Date: 8/23/2012 2:19:00 AM
Kash, just an amazing vision....David
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Date: 8/23/2012 1:49:00 AM
how melancholy. excellent haiku. Cindy
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