Someday

I want to acheive my dreams
And reach my goals
I want to live like the rich
Make my money in rolls
Its not like im incompotent
Im talented in fact
But I cant do anything
With my dad holding me back
Im gonna live my life
From eleven to nine
It might sound crazy
But thats my bedtime
Not for long
Cause ill get away
They'll want me back
When im famous someday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Stone Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 2:44 PM
wow !!
Pasco Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:19 PM
feel you on this one
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 9:26 PM
Dreams are for those who sleep ... and poets who weep ... great write of emancipation ... bravo
Goff Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 8:47 PM
keep writing! brother! fine work! Jim
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