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Someday

I want to acheive my dreams And reach my goals I want to live like the rich Make my money in rolls Its not like im incompotent Im talented in fact But I cant do anything With my dad holding me back Im gonna live my life From eleven to nine It might sound crazy But thats my bedtime Not for long Cause ill get away They'll want me back When im famous someday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2011 2:44:00 PM
wow !!
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:19:00 PM
feel you on this one
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:26:00 PM
Dreams are for those who sleep ... and poets who weep ... great write of emancipation ... bravo
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Date: 6/4/2009 8:47:00 PM
keep writing! brother! fine work! Jim
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