Somebody Say Something

Somebody Say Something

By BJ Welsh

Tumbling towards the mountainous rim
All comes crashing down around him
Don’t be afraid, to rid one of vice
A whisper would have been nice

Looking back on those days
When life was good; albeit hazed
Was it just a phase?
Although it lasted longer than it should
Please, would you say something now if you could?
A few choice words would certainly suffice
A whisper would have been nice

Spiraling out and down it goes
Things go on and nobody knows
Gripping life tighter makes it melt like ice
A whisper would have been nice

If it’s silence that you’re so inclined
Don’t be shocked by a life denied
Repeat if you must once or thrice
A whisper would have been nice

Of course there was nothing to see
He made it that way quite happily
If I told you once I told you twice
A whisper would have been nice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 4, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Brian. Love, Carol
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May 2, 2011 at 9:50 AM
silence.. all around me.. like independence day all is quiet while i try to get my spirit on go..i enjoyed the grip here... sometimes its that one certain voice i want to hear... enjoyed,..p.d.
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