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Somebody Find Me.......

Wherever you are i'll find you Wherever i am You'll find me If everyone leave You'd stay.... You are my lifetime friend.. You are my soul mate.... You loved me before i was even born... before anyone ever knew my name........... Yes You loved me........ You love me still............ (Yes you are "My God") (Charma)

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Annie Rose Cequina

Date: 9/23/2009 12:04:00 AM

Very lovely poem...finding God, finding words, finding heart, finding a new friend in you - thank you for sharing: Annie Rose

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 9/9/2009 11:53:00 AM

Beautiful words Charma. They carry more meaning for me without the final ( ) comment. It felt nice to all of sudden realize who you were talking about based on the capitalization of only one word. But I understand if it seems obscure to reference Him without the G word.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/9/2009 6:05:00 AM

Perfect! Written with understanding of God. Charma, there is a church that teaches the very things that you wrote about in this poem. I'll try to find the link. BRB smiling. THIS ONE FIRSThttp://institute.lds.org/manuals/doctrines-of-the-gospel-student-manual/doc-gosp-01-10-6.asp THEN READ THIS ONE http://www.lds.org/ldsorg/v/index.jsp?hideNav=1&locale=0&sourceId=c03d66ce3a47b010VgnVCM1000004d82620a____&vgnextoid=2354fccf2b7db010VgnVCM1000004d82620aRCRD LOVE YOU> Dane

Sami Al-Khalili

Date: 9/9/2009 4:06:00 AM

Deep and very thoughtful, a beautiful compassionate write. Keep it writing as usual, and I will keep reading! =) Love, Sami.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2009 6:36:00 PM

As beautiful as your heart, Charma! And Ruben is right, all of us love you! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/8/2009 4:53:00 PM

I believe that somebody found you already, Charma! Confidence and believe is all we need. Carry on with your writing! And thank you for your warm comments. Gert

Gareth Heslop

Date: 9/8/2009 2:50:00 PM

nice words...whether about a god or a person, it is the sentiments that should be within us all...thanks for your lovely comments...grrth

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/8/2009 2:48:00 PM

Charma..............Charmaine..............Charma....................Charmaine where are you?????....... CHARMA!!!!!!!CHARMAINE!!!!!!!!!!!!CHARMA!!!!!!!!! That's God calling you. Did you hear Him?