Some Words Against the Gun

keeping full trust on the fulia-handloom some words may be uttered now some words against the gun an winter … some fallen leaves … some cold wind … and a big vacuum in mind … with all those adornments i’m sitting now on the terrace of a shiva-temple in front of me in a pond covered with hyacinth the water-play of the ducks in its water the shadow of the sky the shadow of the trees along the side of the pond a little child is running alone with a toy-ball in hand i don’t wish to know now whether there is any compares to that run i’m only sitting and staring at it may not be known to others but i myself know well that by speaking those words I try to hide my sadness… my loneliness… Oh… instead of gun-powder … if i could put inside the quartos any translation of this joy of the child … those who rule rely on guns those who want to break the rule also rely on guns today when my pen wants to tell something against the gun i don’t know whether it will go in favour or against the sky… the birds… the trees… mankind …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/9/2011 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Murari. Love Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:14:00 PM
many many thanks
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Murari. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2010 6:37:00 AM
Well written....I saw a program the other night about this guy in america that had roamed around just killing complete strangers, mostly kids and women. Pure EVIL--too bad they did not have a gun to put him down quick.
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