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Some Unconnected Footles

Unconnected Footles fun words thoughts tour —- ———————————— Long years Jade tears ———————————- Expand Seive gains —————————- heart hunts long nerve —————————- shoreline foot prints —————————- touch God dance oft —————————- winds flare hopes rise —————————- soul blessed grace placed —————————- wrens meet birds’ song —————————- (c) sally Young eslinger 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2021 7:03:00 PM

Footless are tough, yet this one hops up and down in a prancing way.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/5/2021 5:30:00 AM

So nice to see you Caren! And thank you for your delightful simile assessment. Let me say, I hope so. Hugs!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/3/2021 5:11:00 PM

Did y’all get expand ... sieve as = expansive by word playing that also may expand the meaning of this Footle. I’d to add more rhyming as it might come

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/3/2021 3:54:00 PM

This is awesome Sally...You have woven this so well..More power on your pen..Best regards.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/3/2021 4:48:00 PM

Thank you,JCB! Wonderfully supportive words, truly appreciated. All the best of this night to you! sally

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/3/2021 1:07:00 PM

This is a form I never tried. You did very well. ~~

Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/3/2021 5:02:00 PM

Sir avictor! Footles invite you, then become an almost addictive thought pay in four syllables. Stimulates a mind/vocabulary/imaging play to comoose. I eve referred to symbolism,Buddhist beliefs, bird sonss and bible for there. Great fun. Bet you’d be great at the. Can hardly wait to see Hugs...sally