Some Unconnected Footles

Unconnected Footles

fun words
thoughts tour

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Long years
Jade tears
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Seive  gains
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heart hunts
long nerve
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shoreline
foot prints
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touch God
dance oft
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winds flare
hopes rise
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soul blessed
grace placed
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wrens meet
birds’ song
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(c) sally Young eslinger 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Footless are tough, yet this one hops up and down in a prancing way.
Eslinger Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 5:30 AM
So nice to see you Caren! And thank you for your delightful simile assessment. Let me say, I hope so. Hugs!
Eslinger Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 5:11 PM
Did y’all get expand ... sieve as = expansive by word playing that also may expand the meaning of this Footle. I’d to add more rhyming as it might come
Brul Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 3:54 PM
This is awesome Sally...You have woven this so well..More power on your pen..Best regards.
Eslinger Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Thank you,JCB! Wonderfully supportive words, truly appreciated. All the best of this night to you! sally
Buhagiar Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 1:07 PM
This is a form I never tried. You did very well. ~~
Eslinger Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Sir avictor! Footles invite you, then become an almost addictive thought pay in four syllables. Stimulates a mind/vocabulary/imaging play to comoose. I eve referred to symbolism,Buddhist beliefs, bird sonss and bible for there. Great fun. Bet you’d be great at the. Can hardly wait to see Hugs...sally
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