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In the ultimate heaven true peace you'll find, when things of This world are left behind, no lying tounge will you there Bind, no false teaching, or drunkeness, unless; of Gods Spirit in kind' no more theiving or idolatry or hate; no rage No letchery at this improved life state.' Vistas of beauty All around.' A place of no discord where love abounds.' Now on hell, I'll cast some thought to you, its heavily populated If what I hear is true?? Its incedibly hot.' Theres sulphur gas And demonic wails to top the lot.' There can be no lying Once your in.' And words are useless with all the din.' So You'll find no false teaching..Well whats the sense? No idol Can save you..Now no offence!! You can't get drunk in this Punishment place' There can be no letchery, and you're held in Place, your chains are darkness..Your thirst intense it Will get you screaming..' So in a sense? There are similaritys with Heaven and hell, he's a copier 'old satan.I i often hear tell.' So its up to choice; from what i see, I think I'll call on Jesus Oh yes.' its that boring Heaven for me, may it be!!

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