Some People Feel Owed A Favour

Used to be a team player 
Took a protective stance 
Learned they were advantage takers 
as only I advanced
There I was lending my ear 
left talking to myself 
yet again I’m seeing clear 
I have nobody else 

All the things I’d do for others
are never done for me 
yet still they would mutter 
we all act mutually 
Telling me we were brothers 
and valued equally 
Oh I’m touched (sarcastic) flutters 
knowing I’ve only me 

what’s a friend who doesn’t give 
and then deserves a favour
talks of a life they do not live 
and paints their friends a failure 

To self centred for a chat 
they simply say don’t worry 
make out you overreact 
silenced in a hurry 

Or they’ll label you a liar 
talking for attention 
laugh and say you’re desperate dire 
mocking your fabrication 

Expecting others show interest 
when they’ve something to say 
simple things that cause them stress 
they speak of everyday 

They’ll tell the world that they are selfless 
always giving their time and wisdom 
how every friend they have is hopeless 
needing help with each decision 
and how they cannot give away
as much as they have given 
when they are suffering today 
wore out by all their giving 

The hero seeking sympathy 
who gives so much to others 
even when they make believe 
these stories of what suffers 
as they have a desperate need 
the validation heroes offer 
but now for once selfishly 
the hero runs for cover 

Aren’t they just a worn out angel 
with friends that don’t deserve them 
sad pathetic lying scoundrels 
tolerated though a burden 
without ever appearing thankful 
taking all they’re given 
for you must be so truly mental 
if you believe this angels vision 

Never trust the person 
who complains they give too much 
be aware you’ve heard them 
sound completely out of touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/11/2025 5:52:00 AM
Nice rhymes Nick.
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