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Entry for Refrains in 8 Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Joseph May     

 

 

Now, it is time for us to part I think of you, my dearest heart; in that, my sanity sustain; for some of you does yet remain.  I’ll take your now cold hand in mine and while, once more, they do entwine; soft whisper all my vows again for some of you does yet remain. When only ashes I have left; I will forgive the burning theft and so forbear my ugly pain  for some of you does yet remain. I’ll nightly rest my weary head and dream within our marriage bed then sleep where lovers often lain; for some of you does yet remain.

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Date: 3/21/2025 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Terry. Not much is as empty as a previously shared double bed suddenly becoming that empty bed you always wanted to stretch out in.
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Date: 3/21/2025 5:14:00 PM
Congrats, Terry! Poignant and touching!
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:28:00 PM
Nicely written!
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Date: 3/21/2025 9:02:00 AM
A very touching write, speaks from the heart. Well done, Terry.. :)
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Date: 3/21/2025 7:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/21/2025 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Joseph for the kind comment, placement and for running the contest, it was a fun challenge
Date: 3/5/2025 1:54:00 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful write you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/7/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Paula, I will look out for yours

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