Some Men

HOW CAN U TELL IF HE LOVES U IF HE DON’T SHOW IT
THEY TREAT U WORSE THAN A CHILD TREATS A LUNCH KIT

TO TELL THEM U LOVE THEMUR BODY IS  SOME TIMES IN FEAR
AND IT’S JUST BECAUSE THEY DON’T CARE

AT FIRST THEY LOVE U THEN THEY CHANGE
THEY WILL TREAT U LIKE A MONKEY IN A CAGE

THEY CAN ONLY ACT THIS WAY FOR A MATTER OF TIME
OR WE CAN JUST LEAVE THEM BEHIND.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 23, 2009 at 4:12 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us today Nekeita. I wish you the best in your writing and in life. Love, Carol
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September 22, 2009 at 6:49 PM
Hi! In the poem The Death of Me...I discribe what I believe to be 2 past life deaths..both by drowning and yes I do believe I may again in this lifetime die from ..water...a Hindu astrologer in Nepal told me..it will get me again too...this time..water on the heart...in laymen terms an enlarged heart...seems possible aye?..... I like your verse above too! Many woman feel this way...I wrote Preciuos Fare because of similiar feelins. Please do not use ALL cap's it means you are shouting.Light Love
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