Some Days - Other Days

SOME DAYS

like a little stream
life flows softly and with ease
all dancing eddies


OTHER DAYS

into opaque mud
boulders press with sharp edges
only breathe through crevice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 24, 2010 at 7:17 PM
What a creative and insightful poem. Good use of imagery. Keep on writing! Karen
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April 24, 2010 at 2:17 PM
TRUE, SOME DAYS THINGS GO SMOOTH AND OTHERS ARE JUST BLAHH, ENJOYED, THANK YOU
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April 24, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Excellent comparison....in this one ....That is so true to life..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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