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Some Days Are Ten

Some days are ten, some days are zero Today's been a zero so far My actions have been criticized all day Can't measure up to the bar Perhaps the bar is set way too high For this guy who's nearing the end The things are not all that important I feel But seem so important to my friend Forgive me again if I'm doing things wrong But more important is happiness It's shaken by some big misunderstandings Silly and getting to be quite a mess Time to step back and renew our loving vows To accept love without reservation Small things that get blown out of proportion Must solve for our love's preservation Some days are ten, some days are zero So far today's been a zero

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Date: 4/26/2024 5:45:00 AM
sorry to read about your 'zero' day...truly. I had one of those days yesterday. At times I felt like the day was even a subzero one! I'm a pleaser at heart and couldn't please anyone! AARG! You offer sound advice...sometimes small things get blown out of proportion. Sometimes we need to step back. Thanks for sharing your words this morning. Enjoyed them. In my book, you're Poet #1!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2024 7:16:00 AM
Hey... poet #1!!! I'll take that to the bank! Turn that zero to ten Miss Sera! Guess everyone has them... Love Happy Jack xxx

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