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Some Days Are Like This

There are days when I feel a heaviness, struggle to rise, go down low As if worn out, my mind bends itself twisted and I move real slow Even my shadow feels alone and forlorn in my abandoned shape Hiding my smile inside a crack because my heart is agape It might last a day or spiral down and around for three nights Someone's words must have hurt, some devils' little spites I force a walk along a wooded path or connect to the ocean shore Where I listen for kindness, a love from above, a truth that is more Then I bake some cookies, some sweet goodness to tickle my tummy I'll find my bruised heart starts to open like flowers when it's sunny Those days come, I know, so I let myself go with the sad flow It won't last long if I allow my inner nature to glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/2/2019 8:38:00 PM
G'day Jeanne … I believe so many of us have lived your verse for many different reasons, and this is why I consider your verse a well written statement for many - thanks Jeanne - Lindsay
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/3/2019 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay...I think you are absolutely right...we do all have days like this.
Date: 6/21/2019 7:32:00 AM
Your inner nature is glowing through your poetry, Jeanne. Your poems are amazing; I am so glad I discovered you this morning. I have been needing your poems, and here they are. God is good.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/3/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Caren, Hope you are still well...I love reading your poems too. PS has some amazing poets...so glad I found you.
Date: 6/15/2019 10:21:00 AM
Self can have a little time to be sad...more time to be happy...a no time to be bad...All in the ups and downs...Nice write...
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/16/2019 12:47:00 PM
Definitely no time to be bad! LIfe is so full of ups and downs....I' glad you understand Arturo! Gracias. Jeanne

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