Some Days Are Like This

There are days when I feel a heaviness, struggle to rise, go down low
As if worn out, my mind bends itself twisted and I move real slow

Even my shadow feels alone and forlorn in my abandoned shape
Hiding my smile inside a crack because my heart is agape

It might last a day or spiral down and around for three nights
Someone's words must have hurt, some devils' little spites

I force a walk along a wooded path or connect to the ocean shore
Where I listen for kindness, a love from above, a truth that is more

Then I bake some cookies, some sweet goodness to tickle my tummy
I'll find my bruised heart starts to open like flowers when it's sunny

Those days come, I know, so I let myself go with the sad flow
It won't last long if I allow my inner nature to glow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:38 PM
G'day Jeanne … I believe so many of us have lived your verse for many different reasons, and this is why I consider your verse a well written statement for many - thanks Jeanne - Lindsay
Mcgee Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Lindsay...I think you are absolutely right...we do all have days like this.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Your inner nature is glowing through your poetry, Jeanne. Your poems are amazing; I am so glad I discovered you this morning. I have been needing your poems, and here they are. God is good.
Mcgee Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Thanks Caren, Hope you are still well...I love reading your poems too. PS has some amazing poets...so glad I found you.
Michael Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Self can have a little time to be sad...more time to be happy...a no time to be bad...All in the ups and downs...Nice write...
Mcgee Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Definitely no time to be bad! LIfe is so full of ups and downs....I' glad you understand Arturo! Gracias. Jeanne
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